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shenbuvI do believe that you are still involved,
You're watching me and carefully reading,
So I can write. It's otherwise too cold,
For the eternal inkwell has no bleeding.
Whenever you are ready - don't be late,
It may be late from one sight to another.
I cannot wait, but still, I cannot hate
Myself and you for playing any farther.
26.05.2013
You're watching me and carefully reading,
So I can write. It's otherwise too cold,
For the eternal inkwell has no bleeding.
Whenever you are ready - don't be late,
It may be late from one sight to another.
I cannot wait, but still, I cannot hate
Myself and you for playing any farther.
26.05.2013
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Date: 2013-05-27 12:40 am (UTC)еще!
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Date: 2013-05-27 12:48 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-05-27 12:49 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-05-27 02:32 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-05-27 05:47 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-05-27 06:00 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-05-27 06:11 am (UTC)а farther вместо further не лучше в рифму ложится?
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Date: 2013-05-27 06:18 am (UTC)Исправила.
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Date: 2013-05-27 06:24 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-05-27 06:27 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-05-27 08:46 am (UTC)А не не надо are перед carefully reading, во второй строчке?
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Date: 2013-05-27 08:53 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-05-27 08:55 am (UTC)И грамматически это не помешало бы тоже, кажется.
Но в любом случае это мелочь.
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Date: 2013-05-27 09:10 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-05-27 09:16 am (UTC)У меня четыре выходит.
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Date: 2013-05-27 09:22 am (UTC)В carefully одно главное и второе подразумевается.
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Date: 2013-05-27 09:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2013-05-27 09:23 am (UTC)